Before two days I went with my friend in the desert. We prepare tents, food, bicycles. At 7:00 clock in the morning we moved to the desert.
The first time in the desert we set up the tents and cook the breakfast. After that we playing with bicycles. At 11 am we started cooking the lunch food after that relaxed. At 4 pm my friend went to discover the some place in the desert and we back late. After sunset at 8 pm we 8 person every 2 person sleeping in one tent, but at 10 pm I heard stronger sound I went out but did see anything.
Moreover, I am back to my tent, my friends slept . After 10 mantis the sounds the back but its high and with stones. My friends heads and we are all worried, but we couldn’t. After 10 mantis the sound stopped and we went out and we run. He who did movements the one of our friends, and went behind him and hit him.
Moreover, I am back to my tent, my friends slept . After 10 mantis the sounds the back but its high and with stones. My friends heads and we are all worried, but we couldn’t. After 10 mantis the sound stopped and we went out and we run. He who did movements the one of our friends, and went behind him and hit him.
Finally, a trip to the desert its beautiful and has adventures. I liked going to desert and in my life once every month I go to desert.
Moh'd Khalid:
ReplyDeleteGood stories and writig, but you need to fix your posts for: verb tense; spelling; capital letters, etc. which will all be graded.
Good start!
The Fox